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My house I
My house is big. It has four bedrooms, two bathrooms, one a kitchen, one study, and one living and dining rooms.
The kitchen is furnished equipped with cupboards, cooker, oven, microwave, dishwasher, washing machine, fridge, sink, and other kitchen appliances, such as the toaster. There is also a and one table with four chairs. (A table and chairs are not appliances, they are furniture)
The four bedrooms are for our son, our daughter, one for my wife and I, and the other for grandchildren. The Most of the time the three bedrooms are empty, because our children live in other cities and we haven't any grandchildren. (Neither have I :-( )
I spend most of my time in the study In the study is where I'm more time. There is a computer, some bookcases, an armchair and the kennel, well the pad for my dog. My dogs' is name Blaky.
My house I
My house is big. It has four bedrooms, two bathrooms, one a kitchen, one a study, and one a living room and of course, [to make your sentence sound more interesting than just a straight forward report] a dining room.
The kitchen is furnished with cupboards, a stovetop, cooker, an oven, a microwave, a dishwasher, a washing machine, a refridgerator, sink and other kitchen appliances, such as the toaster. and one We also have a breakfast table with four chairs.
Of the four bedrooms, are one is for our son, one for our daughter, one for my wife and I, and the last one other for our grandchildren. The most of the time, the three other rooms are empty, because as our children live in other cities and we haven't any grandchildren live in another city.
In The study is where I'm more spent most of my time. There is a computer, some bookcases, an armchair and the "kennel", well actually, the pad for my dog,. My dog is name Blaky. [or is it "Blacky"?]
My house I
My house is big. It has four bedrooms, two bathroom, one kitchen, one study and one living and dining room.
The kitchen is furnished with cupboards, cooker stove, oven, microwave, dishwasher, washing machine, fridge, sink, other kitchen appliances, such as the a toaster, and one a table with four chairs.
The four bedrooms are for our son, our daughter, one for my wife and I me, and another for grandchildren. The Most of the time they are empty, because our children live in other cities and we haven't any grandchildren.
In the study is where I'm more time Most of the time I'm in the study. There is a computer, some bookcases, an armchair and the kennel, that is, well the pad for my dog. My dog is name Blaky.
My house I
My house is big. It has four bedrooms, two bathroom, one kitchen, one a study room ,and one living and dining room.
The kitchen is furnished with cupboards, cooker, oven, microwave, dishwasher, washing machine, fridge, sink, other kitchen appliances,such as toaster, and one a dining table with four chairs good for four.
The four bedrooms are for our son, our daughter, one for my wife and I, and other for grandchildren. The Which most of the time are empty, because our children live in other cities and we haven't any grandchildren yet.
In the study room is where I'm I spent more time. There is a computer, some bookcase, an armchair and the kennel, well the pad for my dog. My dog is name Blaky.
I was confused on this part " an armchair and the kennel, well the pad for my dog." (feels like "well the pad for my dog" is inappropriate in the sentence.
Hope I help you.
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