ESOL Examination Writing

Question 6. You have recently moved to a town and have bought this postcard of the town to send to your penpal. 
In your postcard to your penpal, you should
- explain why you have moved.
- tell your friend what facilities the town has.
- say what you dislike about living there.

Answer:

Hi Ben,

Here is a postcard of the city where I live now. I moved to this city because I started my degree here three months ago. There are many facilities in the city. For example, the bus and train aren't very expensive and a swimming pool is near my house. I am fine, but i don't like being far off from my friends and family and, in my opinion, people are not close to one another in this city. 
See you soon,
Alberto.

((Please if you correct me, can you mark me between 1(bad)-5(excellent)? Thank you!!))

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