교정 · 5
Tuesday
Well, yesterday I talkedabout of my forum. Today when the class finished, I say asked to my partner if he can goes with me to visit a restaurant where I saw a man that may be could be from Italy or some other country. So he said "Yes I can, I have a lot of time." (you need to use quotes if you want to use his words directly)
We arrived to at the place and the chef asked me, "What do you want for dinner?" Then I said, "I can wait here when until you finish to attend waiting on the lady." I waited five minutes and then I said my introduction. "Hi I'm a university student of the university and I'm organizing a little forum about different factors: culture,economy education ..." He asked me what he needs to do. I said you can tell us how is about your country. How you arrived to in Mexico? The differences between your country and Mexico in the topic of in regards to education and then he said "Really I don't am not interested that I can in participing. I don't like that (type of thing)." I said thank you for your time, Mr. Bye! Nice to meet you.
Really I don't understand this attitude. I considerer think that this forum doesn't have anything disrespecful. It is something educational.
Nice job! In order to improve your writing I would concentrate on punctuation marks, capitalization, and verb tense. You don't have to use direct quotes. For example instead of ...He said, "I don't want to participate." You could say... he said that he doesn't want to participate. By adding 'that' it changes to an indirect quote and you write it in the third person.
I also don't know why he didn't want to participate. Maybe he is just busy with his business?
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