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First notebook entry: Introducing myself Hey,I'm Crasy.The age is 16.I'm a chinese girl.I think I'm outgoing,and I like to make friends.Humorously,Did you focus on my name?Maybe you called this name"Crazy"...Haaaaah,actually is "Crasy".This funny name was made by myself.How smart I am! At this time,I just want to improve my English,and make more foreign friends.

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First notebook entry: Introducing myself

Hey, I'm Crasy.  I'm 16. I'm a Chinese. girl.I think I'm outgoing and I like to make friends. By the way, did you focus on my name?  Maybe you thought my name was name"Crazy"...Haaaaah,actually it's "Crasy".  It's a funny name that I made up by myself.  I'm so smart! 

Right now,  I just want to improve my English skills and make more foreign friends.
 
Good start.  No, I read so many new names a day - and I've learned to read very slowly and 
just take things for whatever they appear to be (name-wise) anyway. 

Red            =   Capitalization
Orange      =   Relocated - Moved
Blue           =   Correction and Spelling
Green        =  More natural - Common                      
Purple        =   Comment - Suggestion
Underline =   Punctuation - Spacing 
© Color Correction Key by Nancy4366
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First notebook entry: Introducing myself

Hey,I'm Crasy.I'm 16.I'm a chinese girl.I think I'm outgoing,and I like to make friends.Humorously, Didn't you notice something about my name ?Maybe you misread it as "Crazy"...Haaaaah,actually it's "Crasy".This funny name was made by myself.How smart I am!

At this time,I just want to improve my English,and make more foreigner friends.

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