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The Tomb-Sweeping Day Tomorrow is the Tomb-Sweeping Day, a traditional festival for China. And there must be lots of people gathered to hold a memorial ceremony for their ancestors or departed member.I am also a portion thereof , but I cannot go home with my relatives for I am working in the Dongguan area ,Guangdong province. But fortunately my wife flied here with my son, who bring me a lot of fun. I thank them very much.
2014년 4월 4일 오전 1:08
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The Tomb-Sweeping Day

Tomorrow is the Tomb-Sweeping Day, a traditional festival for China. And there will be lots of people gathered to hold a memorial ceremony for their ancestors or departed family member. I am also a portion thereof, but I cannot go home with my relatives for I am working in the Dongguan area, Guangdong province. But fortunately my wife stayed here with my son, who bring me a lot of fun. I thank them very much.

 

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2014년 4월 4일
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