Diana Liu
Destiny I love to listen to others' story. Listening to others experience is an interesting thing. I often think about what others said. When people talk about their life, they always said whatever happened was predestined.Many people thought that we can not control our destiny.it is hold on by god. But i don't think so. I prefer to make efforts by myself. Although i can not predit my future.,I would be more excellent .whatever other said, i will do myself. i believe destiny, i do believe myself can change my destiny through my hands. i will smile everday.
2014년 4월 19일 오전 8:22
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Destiny

I love to listen to others' stories. Listening to others' experiences is an interesting thing. I often think about what others have said. When people talk about their life, they always say whatever happened was predestined. Many people think that we can not control our destiny. It is held by god. But i don't think so. I prefer to make efforts by myself. Although I can not predit my future, I would be much better. Whatever others say, I will do it myself. I believe destiny, I do believe I can change my destiny with my own hands. I will smile everday.

Good effort May )

2014년 4월 19일
可以呀。you should say:我学习中文,rather than 学习中国人
2014년 5월 2일
我学习中国人,所以你能帮助我吗?
2014년 5월 1일

Destiny

I love to listen to others stories. Listening to others experiences is an interesting thing. I often think about what others said. When people talk about their life, they always said whatever happened was predestined,so many people think that we cannot control our destiny.It is held on by god. But I don't think so. I prefer to make efforts by myself. Although I cannot predict my future.I would be more most excellent .whatever other said, I will do myself. I believe in destiny, I do believe myself can change my destiny through my hands. i will smile everday.

2014년 5월 1일
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