The new town park My city is very well! Today I have visited the new park. It is beautiful and rich of people. There are many play for children. The park was built by the old mayor. Many people use it

Tommaso

The new town park My city is very well! Today I have visited the new park. It is beautiful and rich of people. There are many play for children. The park was built by the old mayor. Many people use it for jogging. Today morning I went jogging in the park.

2014년 4월 19일 오후 7:11

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The new town park

My city is great! Today I have visited the new park. It is beautiful and full of people. There are many places to play for children. The park was built by the former mayor. Many people use it for jogging. This morning I went jogging in the park.

Nice paragraph Tommaso! I made a few suggestions and corrections to make you sound more like a native speaker. Let me know if you have any questions!

-Mary

2014년 4월 19일

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