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a new job I'm writing for the first time a c.v. in english language and I'd like know if these phrases are correct: I have organizational skills thanks to the experience either as a secretary, managing e-mail, documents and appointments, or as entertainer, where I've contributed to manage and to organize events and partys for children. I've really enjoyed that experience because I like working with other people, expecially in a multicultural environment, so I can work well as a member of a team. Is correct the use of either and or?
2014년 4월 23일 오후 7:49
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A New Job

I'm writing my CV for the first time a c.v. in English, language and I'd like know if these phrases are correct:

I have gained organizational skills thanks to the experience either as a secretary., My work included managing e-mails, documents and appointments., I have also worked as an events organiser or as entertainer, where I've contributed towards the management and to organize organisation of events and partys parties for children. I've really enjoyed that experience because I like working with other people, expecially in a multicultural environment., so I can am able to  work well as a member of a team.

Is correct the use of either and or?

2014년 4월 27일
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a new job

I'm writing for the first time a c.v. in english language and I'd like know if these phrases are correct:

I have <em>good </em>organizational skills thanks to <em>my</em> experience either as a secretary <em>and event and party planner for children. These skills include</em> managing e-mail<em>s</em>, documents and appointments. or as entertainer, where I've contributed to manage and to organize events and partys (parties) for children. I've really enjoyed that <em>these</em> experiences because I like working with other people, ex<em>s</em>pecially in a multicultural environment. I can <em>also</em> work well as a member of a team.

Is correct the use of either and or?

 

I understood your meaning completely, however, this is more natural sounding. I hope I have helped. Your english is good!

 

 

2014년 4월 27일
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