Roma
Tired day today is tired day .. I went to seminar human development . when i wanted back to my home. It was difficult to find any transport and , i came back late
2014년 4월 23일 오후 10:18
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Tired day

Today is was a tiring day.  I went to seminar about human development. When I wanted to go back to my home, it was difficult to find any transport and I got back late.

2014년 4월 23일

A Tiring Day

today is tired day It was a tiring day today... I went to a seminar on human development. when i wanted back to my home. It was difficult to find any transport home after the seminar and , I came arrived back late.

2014년 12월 26일

Good but you have some mistakes, for example,
How to build sentence and placed in inappropriate time
And do not you start it with a capital letter in each sentence Blah
Provide the epithet name
Continue to exercise and remember that the English-language very easy more than it looks
And good luck

2014년 12월 26일
Alhamulellah
2014년 4월 23일
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