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I need to change I'm glad to received your letter again, very busy recently, busy writing a paper, busy with work, one day down feel very tired! But it is very full, this Sunday will go to the library reading a book, I already have a period of time didn't go to the library, this is very bad!So I want to change your own time, that this cannot continue!
2014년 4월 24일 오전 3:04
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I need to change

I'm glad to received receive your letter again. Recently, I am busy writing a paper, busy with work.,  one day down I feel felt very tired. But it is very full, This Sunday I will go to the library to reading a book. It's already have a period of a long time I havenot been didn't go to the library, this it is very bad! So I want to change your my own time schedule, that this cannot not to continue as previous days!

 

Please suggest if it makes sense.

2014년 4월 24일
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