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Travel in Hangzhou_There is a paradise in heaven, while there are Suzhou and Hangzhou on earth
There is an old Chinese saying - There is a paradise in heaven, while there are Suzhou and Hangzhou on earth! The beauty and wealth of Hangzhou are also mentioned in Marco Polo's description of this area.
(Or, 'The beauty and wealth of Hangzhou are also mentioned in Marco Polo's writings.')
Last week, I travelled to Hangzhou with friends. Though I went have been there a few times with family and friends before, I was still so impressed by the beautiful view of Hangzhou when I saw it again, especially the West Lake, which was made a UNESCO World Heritage Site in 2011.
(Use present perfect to talk about things you've done in the past, but which you don't give a specific time for. For example, 'I've been to China three times.')
We visited the Ten Scenes of West Lake, Lingyin Temple, and Xixi National Wetland Park. We also tried various kinds of delicious Hangzhou cuisine! We spent about one week there, but had to leave because of the limited time! I really want to go back again when I have another chance!
A very well written piece of writing!
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