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first time
someone i met through another website saying that it will be suit for me recommended me this website on today. i skimed lots of menu on this website. it is suitable for me to learning english. i'm contented with it. from now on, i'll write many notes and i hope i get much feedback from this place
You can say the above like so:
A person I met on a different website recommended Italki to me today and said it is suitable for me.
I skimmed through a lot of menus on this website. I feel it is a good website from which I can learn English. I'm content with it (You can also say "I am satisfied with it."). From now on I'll write a lot of notes here and hope to get plenty of feedback too.
Welcome to Italki ^^ Hope you meet a lot of new people here and improve you English even more! Good luck .
Hi Jaehyun! I'm new too. :)
first time
someone i met through another website saying that it will be suit for me recommended me this website on today. i skimed lots of menu on this website.
it is suitable for me to learning english. i'm contented with it. from now on, i'll write many notes and i hope i get much feedback from this place
"Saying" should be past tense in this situation ="said"
"Lots of menu" should be "A lot of menues" because you looked at multiple menus. It's plural.
----------------------- I would say:
My first time
Today, someone I met through another website recommended iTalki, because it would suitable for me. I skimmed many menus on the website. I decided it is suitable for helping me learn English. I'm contented with it. From now on, I'll write many notes, and I hope to get as much feedback as possible.
Good job! Your English is so much better than my Korean.
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