One day Salvador Dalí said “The perfection does not exist, you will never achieve it”, and he was right, but to be honest, reality shows us that society will judge mistakes. [I found his quote also to be translated to English as: “Have no fear of perfection - you'll never reach it.”]

     Being a perfectionist has some advantages. One of them is to do one thing very well. This characteristic is specifically helpful in the workplace, because perfectionists do generally look for the highest quality.  That is important, however achieving perfection is not as easy as it seems. It requires time, stress, and a little madness and imagination.

     When I was working on my thesis something similiar happened. My tutor was a perfectionist and I was too, so the situation was uncomfortable. Sometimes it felt as if I would never finish the work. For example: My tutor would read the chapters I wrote, and provide corrections, then when I got home, I would complete his suggested corrections and some more of my own in order to “improve.” Well, when my tutor would review the thesis again, he would say: “Oh my God, Grecia! You changed everything! My corrections were enough! Why did you do this? Now I have to read the whole thing again!" 

     Honestly, it was difficult; I felt a little crazy because I read every sentence of my thesis every day, over and over again. I was so stressed that I came down with gastritis. After that, I realized that I should take it easy.

     In conclusion: Dalí was right. Perfection is a utopia, however I think it is wise to look for the best in any area of your life. In spite of looking for perfection, I know that I will never have it. Even this essay is not perfect. 

Grecia,
I enjoyed reading and suggesting improvements for your essay. You will see the changes in blue. I will mention that you should think about how and where to place punctiation, especially how and where to end each sentence.  Thank you for being such a fine contributor to iTalki.com.

The Perfection

One day Salvador Dalí said “The Perfection does not exist, you will never achieve it”, and he was right; but, to be honest, the reality shows us the that society always judges the mistakes.  (También se podría decir "La realidad nos ha demostrado que la sociedad siempre juzga los errores")

To be a perfectionist has some advantages. One of them is to do some well done in any brand, this characteristic is helpful specifically in the work, (No entiendo que quieres decir) because generally perfectionist people are looking for the best, the for quality and obviously this is very important. However looking for the perfection is not so as easy like as it seems ( Este es un comparación "tan fácil como parece") , it requires quite time, stress, and until a little madness and imagination to get what you want.

When I worked on my thesis happened something like this, my tutor was perfectionist and me too, my tutor and I were both perfectionists  so the situation was not comfortable because sometimes I felt like if that I would never finish the work. I am going to show an example: My tutor read the chapters what I wrote that I had written and he made me corrections about it on them, when I got home I made the corrections that he had suggested but besides I also made other corrections in order to “improve” the chapters. Well, when my tutor read the chapter again, he told me “Oh my God Grecia you have changed everything. My corrections were enough, why did you do this? Now I have to read every sentences again”.

Honestly, it was difficult. I was became a little crazy because I read each sentence of my thesis every day, over and over again.  I was so stressed that I got became sick of  with gastritis, so I realized out that I should take it easy.

Conclusion:
Dalí was right.
The Perfection is an utopy utopia, however I think it is necessary to looking for  achieve the best in any area of your life. (Se podría decir "para buscar el mejor en cualquier área de tu vida", pero esto es muy pasivo y no sugiere que va a hacer ningún cambio. Lograr es más activo.)
In spite of looking for the perfection I know that I will never have it, even, this essay is perfect.

See you =)

¡Muy bien! Es necesario trabajar en la longitud de sus frases. Algunos de ellos son muy largos.