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My last essay:
Someone once said: ' don't ever regret what you've done, but regret what you didn't do'.
This is a wonderful advice but, what would happen if everybody could go back in time? Probably most of us would change moments in which we felt angry and said things that might've hurt others, mainly people who we love. Perhaps we'd spend more time with our family, especially relatives who have died and you think that you did not show them enough affection to. There may be occasions when you met people who dissapointed you, so if you were able to go back in time, you'd never choose them like friends or partners.
On the other hand if I could go back to the past, I would prefer to live the good times again, and not change anything, because I think everybody needs to make mistakes in their life to learn and improve as a person.
Ala ahí queda eso, que opinais?
En general esta bien. errores mínimos
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