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Hi Guys... Hi, My Names is Lidiane, I born and live in Brazil. Well, I want learning english because is incredible language and i love. Is first time that I write here, so, sorry for my english... haha
2014년 7월 8일 오후 2:09
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Hi Guys...

Hi, my names is Lidiane, I born and live in Brazil.
Well, I want to learning English because it's an incredible language and I love it.
This is first time that I have posted an entry here, so, sorry for my English... haha

2014년 7월 8일
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Hi Guys...

Hi. My Names is Lidiane. I was born and live in Brazil. Well, I want to learning english because it's an incredible language and i love it.
Is you can say it is the or It's the first time that I have written here so sorry for forgive my english... haha

 

 

Good job though.  Keep it up.

2014년 8월 31일
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Hi Guys...

Hi, My Names is Lidiane, I born and live in Brazil.
Well, I want learning english because is incredible language and i love.
Is first time that I write here, so, sorry for my english... haha

 

Hello:) have a good day. Here is my corrections.

 

Hi Guys...

Hi, My Names is Lidiane. I live in Brazil and I was born there too. I really love English. I want to learn English because I think it is an incredible language. It is the first time for me to write a message here, so, sorry for my English... haha.

 

2014년 7월 8일
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My Name is 

I want to learn english

i love it

it's the first time 

 

 

2014년 7월 8일
Hello dear I'm not sure if my answers are correct. :$
2014년 7월 8일
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