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Why did I enter computer science major. The end of the 20th century was hard economic times onto Korea. At this time, Financial crisis and the collapse of dot-com bubble occurred concurrently. Because of the difficult time, the my father’s web service company failed and my parent got divorced by a huge doubt. Although my father failed to regain the honor of past until now, I have grown up watching his practice based on the strong conviction that IT will change the world fundamentally. Naturally, I entered computer science major and have made an great effort during my undergraduate period to be an innovative person who change the world via computer technology.
2014년 7월 13일 오전 9:20
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You're quite good :D but i'd like you to explain this part so I can help you correct it " the my father’s web service company failed and my parent got divorced by a huge doubt " keep the good work
2014년 7월 24일

Why did I enter computer science major.

The end of the 20th century was hard economic times onto Korea. At this time, Financial crisis and the collapse of dot-com bubble occurred concurrently. Because of the difficult time, my father’s web service company failed and my parents got divorced by a huge doubt ( what do you exactely mean by 'doubt') . Although my father failed to regain the honor of past until now, I have grown up watching his practice based on the strong conviction that IT will change the world fundamentally. Naturally, I entered computer science major and have made a great effort during my undergraduate period to be an innovative person who changes the world via computer technology.

2014년 7월 24일
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