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First notebook entry: Introducing myself My name is Mary. I live in city Brest in Belarus. I learn English, because I think it is necessary to know this language in modern world. It can help you in work, in travel, in communicate with friends, who live in other countries, in understanding of films and songs in English and in many other things. The English language is the international language. I hope that here I will make my English better and find new friends.

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First notebook entry: Introducing myself

My name is Mary. I live in Brest city Brest in Belarus.
I learn English, because I think it is necessary to know this language in modern world. It can help you in work, in travel, in communicateion with friends, who live in other countries, in understanding of films and songs in English and in many other things. The English language is the international language. I hope that here I will make my English better and find new friends.

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Что-то никто вас не поправляет, так я решил поправить. Хотя я и не великий эксперт)
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И еще, вы не сообщили ничего про Испанский )
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...The English language is the an international language. I hope that here I will make my English better and find new friends.

Здесь тоже ошибка, я сразу не заметил.
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Your writing is very good! If you want to see some pronunciation videos, you can find some here on my website. Take care! http://onlineenglishteacherdave.webs.com/apps/videos/

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