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Could you check my small post? Manythanks in advance! I hope you are doing great and all is well with your family. Yesterday I went to the hospital and I was told that my hormones are disbalanced and I need treatment. Tomorrow I will try to get referral to a thyroid speacilist. I am looking forward to July 29,. Please take good care and I hope to write more tomorrow.
2014년 7월 22일 오후 7:23
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Could you check my small post? Many (spacing) thanks in advance!

I hope you are doing great and all is well with your family.
Yesterday I went to the hospital and I was told that my hormones are disbalanced imbalanced and I need treatment.
Tomorrow I will try to get a referral to a thyroid speacilist.
I am looking forward to July 29,.
Please take good care and I hope to write more tomorrow.

 

Well done!

2014년 7월 22일

Could you check my small post?  Many thanks in advance!

 

I hope you are doing great and all is well with your family.


Yesterday I went to the hospital and I was told that my hormones are dis out of balanced and I need treatment. (or possibly - ...and I was told that I have a hormone imbalance and...)


Tomorrow I will try to get a referral to a thyroid speacilist specialist.  (possible alternative - Tomorrow I will try to make an appointment with a thyroid specialist.)


I am looking forward to July 29,.


Please take good care and I hope to write more tomorrow.

2014년 7월 22일

Could you check my small post? Manythanks in advance!

I hope you are doing great and all is well with your family.
Yesterday I went to the hospital and I was told that my hormones are imbalanced and I need treatment.
Tomorrow, I will try to get a referral to a thyroid specialist.
I am looking forward to July 29th.
Please take good care, and I hope to write more tomorrow.

2014년 7월 22일
It's very good with just one or two small mistakes.
2014년 7월 22일
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