Makoto
June 19, 2014 Life puts burden on your shoulders hides behind you, the weight could drag you down on your knees but you are likely never gonna know what makes it so bad. The strength is given to us to hold up something which is even bigger than our physical appearance, the trick is to lean forward to your balance.
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June 19, 2014

Life puts {more appropriate word=places} a burden on your shoulders and hides (it?) behind you. The weight could drag you down* on to your knees, but you are likely never gonna going to** know what makes it so bad. The strength is given to us to hold up something which that is even bigger than our physical appearance, the trick is to lean forward to your balance yourself.

 

*Or just: "The weight drags you down to your knees"...

**"Gonna" is slang, and even though we may say it when we speak informally, we don't generally write it, unless we're writing creatively, such as lyrics to a song.

2014년 7월 23일
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