William
My experience with English I like English. I find it interesting to learn mainly because it is one of the most spoken languages ​​in the world. I will start doing a course and I intend to use italki to enhance my learning and meeting new people.I use google translator for me to communicate with people.I am very excited to go to Australia and meet Sidney.I hope I can achieve my goals with help from italki to finish my course and speaking English fluently.
2014년 7월 24일 오전 2:07
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My experience with English

I like the English language. I find it interesting to learn mainly because it is one of the most spoken languages in the world. I will start doing a course and I intend to use italki to enhance my learning and to meeting new people. I use the google translator for me to communicate with people. I am very excited to go to Australia and meet people in Sidney.I hope I can achieve my goals with help from italki to finish my course and speaking English fluently.

 

<em>Excellent! I have a few optional suggestions in blue. The rest of the corrections are for clarity and flow. Keep up the practice and have fun in Sidney.</em>

2014년 7월 24일
2

My Experience With English

I like English. I find it English interesting to learn mainly because it is one of the most widely spoken languages in the world. I will start doing taking a course and I intend to use italki to enhance my learning and to meeting new people. I use google translator for me to communicate with people. I am very excited to go to Australia and meet see Sidney [1]. With help from italki, I hope I can achieve my goals with help from italki to of finishing/completing my course and speaking English fluently.

2014년 7월 24일
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