DAEHANLEE
My brother is leaving. My younger brother is going to England to study English. I think he will do well. Because he is very hard working everytime when he does what he wants. The thing is that the weather is not good near my country. what's more,nowadays, there are many accidents in the world. I hope everything will be great on his way.
2014년 7월 24일 오후 12:28
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My brother is leaving.

My younger brother is going to England to study English.
I think he will do well because he is very hard working whenever he does what he wants.
The thing is that the weather is not good near my country.
what's more,nowadays, there are many accidents in the world.
I hope everything will be great on his way.

 

Not bad! This was very sweet :)

2014년 7월 26일
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