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Season
My favorite season is summer, because in the summer the peoples generally go to the beach, go to the clubs, and go to the movies and etc.I don't like in the winter, because it's cold .
In the autumm the leaves fall from the trees fall , the nature is sad.
In the spring the flowers are radiant.
Come Hurry up spring!
Hi Karina, I love your enthusiasm for life, and I hope you don't mind a few corrections. Of course, there are 100 different ways to write the same thing, so I have only corrected what you wrote and not rewritten the passage. Have a great day, Andi
Season
My favorite season is summer, because in summer people generally go to the beach, go to clubs, go to the movies, etc. I don't like winter because it is cold.
In the autumm, the leaves from the trees fall and nature feels sad.
In the spring, flowers are radiant.
Come spring!
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