Let me introduce my self. Hi, my name is Hye-Jin Jeong, and my English name is Genie. I live in Korea and want to live in foreign nations. I want to be fluent English speaker. My hobby is singing and

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Let me introduce my self. Hi, my name is Hye-Jin Jeong, and my English name is Genie. I live in Korea and want to live in foreign nations. I want to be fluent English speaker. My hobby is singing and listening music, and I'm a leader of a hiphop circle in my school. Although my English is poor, I want to make foreigner friends in here. Thank you.

2014년 7월 28일 오후 2:59

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Let me introduce my self.

Hi, my name is Hye-Jin Jeong, and my English name is Genie. I live in Korea and want to live in foreign nations countries. I want to be a fluent English speaker. My hobby is singing and listening to music, and I'm a leader of a hiphop circle in my school. Although my English is poor, I want to make foreigner friends in here. Thank you.

Notes: I replaced "nations" with "countries" because we would more normally use "countries" in this case.

Your English is good.

2014년 7월 28일

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