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It's too hard to study all day Currently I'm studying all day, but I can't tell why I'm studying so hard like this. Studying is hard because the weather is so hot in these days. I repeat turning on and of the air conditioner. It's too hot when I turn it off and It gets cold when I turn it on.. And I'm curious that what my electric bill will cost this month.
2014년 7월 31일 오전 11:28
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It's too hard to study all day.

 

Currently, I'm studying all day, but I can't tell why I'm studying so hard like this.

[It's more natural to say "I'm currently studying all day, but I can't tell why I'm studying so hard like this"]


Studying is hard because the weather is so hot in these days.


I repeat am turning the air conditioner on and off the air conditioner repeatedly.


It's too hot when I turn it off and it gets cold when I turn it on..


And I'm curious that what about how much my electric bill will cost this month.

 

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You have written it well! Good job :)

2014년 7월 31일
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