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THe road of english learning I'm a chinese and I want to learning english very much. I hope I can write an article every day. But I dont have much free time. So, I made a plan for myself. In a week I will write at least two articles in english. I hope everybody can help me. If you want to learn mandarins, i can help you, I'd like to be language partners with you.
2014년 7월 31일 오후 2:13
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THe road of english learning

The Road to Learning English (careful with capitalization!)

I'm a chinese and I want to learning english very much.

I am Chinese and I want to learn English very much. ("I'm a chinese" is Chinese grammar 我是一个中国人. In English it is more natural to say "I am Chinese.")

I hope I can write an article every day.

I would like to write one article each day. (The word "hope" implies that you think it will happen. But, from the following text, it is clear that you do not think it will happy. Therefore, using "would like to" is more accurate.)

But I dont have much free time.

But I don't have much free time. (need the apostrophe)
So, I made a plan for myself.

(perfect)

In a week I will write at least two articles in english.

Each week, I will write at least two articles in English.

I hope everybody can help me.

(perfect)

If you want to learn mandarins, i can help you, I'd like to be language partners with you.

If you would like to learn Mandarin, I can help you. I would like to be language partners with you.

 

祝你学习顺利!听起来你的计划是可行的。加油!

2014년 7월 31일

Let me wirite it again.

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The Road Of Learning English 

I'm chinese and I want to learn english very much.

I would like to write one article each day.

But I don't have much free time.
So, I made a plan for myself.

each week I will write at least two articles in English.

I hope everybody can help me.

If you would like to learn Mandarins, I can help you,

I would like to be language partners with you.

2014년 8월 1일
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