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article on family activities Could you correct the following expressions please? Thank you Be cool with your family. ( is this a good title, does it make sense ) can you imagine living around animals? if I were you I woudn´t think it I am sure you ´ll agree with that decision. there are many wild species. one of the best activities is coexisting with species in extinction a place where you will fall in love with it.
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article on family activities

Could you correct the following expressions please? Thank you

Be cool with your family. ( is this a good title, does it make sense ) 

can you imagine living around animals?

if I were you I wouldn´t think it

I am sure you´ll agree with that decision.

there are many wild species.

one of the best activities is coexisting with species in extinction - The english in this sentence is correct but I don't understand what you are trying to say?

a place where you will fall in love with it. - A place you will fall in love with.

2014년 7월 31일
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