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If You Could, Help Me! (1)

I want to get in contact with ("get in touch with" sounds better, I think, or simply "meet") a native speaker (girl) from the Us, or the UK or Canada, to help me improve my language English. 
 
I will would be grateful for your help.

Thank you (:

(1) Most words are capitalized in an English title.