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My lunch When I get up,it is 12 o'clock.My family went to their company,I had to cook myself.So I went to supermarket to buy the original material of food.I bought broccoli, pork and spinach. when I got home,I cooked them.I ate them and drunk the rose liquor.It was a good lunch.
2014년 8월 1일 오전 7:39
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When I get got up,it is was (already) 12 o'clock. As my family went to their company, I had to cook by myself. So I went to the supermarket to buy the original material of ingredients for my meal. I bought broccoli, pork and spinach. When I got (back) home, I cooked them. I ate them and drunk drank the rose liquor. It was a good lunch.

 

Well written! 

I have made a few corrections to make the sentences more natural :)

 

2014년 8월 1일
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