FedericaMantovani
London Last year i've been in London with my schoolmates. We arrived at London Gatwick from Venice. We visited a lot of place of the city and we enjoyed a lot the shops of London, for example Victoria's Secret's shop in New Bond Street. One of the place of London that i've prefered is Piccadilly Circus. I've met many cultures and i've enjoyed the big city life! I hope to go to London soon!
2014년 8월 1일 오전 8:55
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London

Last year i've been in I went to London with my schoolmates.
We arrived at London Gatwick from Venice. We visited a lot of place of the places in the city, and we enjoyed a lot the shops of London. For example, we went to Victoria's Secrets shop in on New Bond Street. One of the place of places in London that i've prefered is was Piccadilly Circus. I've met many cultures, and i've I've enjoyed the big city life!
I hope to go return to London soon!

 

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2014년 8월 1일
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