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Its my first Entry In my research to improve my poor english i found this page and i think it's a great resource to my goal. Well, my name is Franko Cataño i'm 24 years old i'm from Lima, Peru and i study architecture at Ricardo Palma university. I love all things of my career and i'd like to travel around the world and visit for example USA, France, Greece, Japon, Rusia and more! for this reason i want to make friends of other countries and know about theirs cities and their people, if you want be my friend message me i can help you with Spanish. :D In addition, I work like freelancer of Architectural Visualization 3D is a work in paralel to my studies. In the future ill write about my hobbies and what i do in my free times like Calisthenic, Yoga, Draw, Dance Salsa, travel, photography and my love the Handbalance( ill attach a pic). Please dont hesitate to correct me i'd appreciate it. Muchas gracias por leerme.

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My first Entry

In my search for ways to improve my poor level of English, I found this page and I think it's a great resource to help me achieve my goal.

Well, my name is Franko Cataño.   I'm 24 years old.   I'm from Lima, Peru and I study architecture at Ricardo
Palma university. I love everything about my degree and I'd like to travel around the world and visit for example, USA, France, Greece, Japan, Russia and elsewhere!  For this reason, I want to make friends with people in other countries and learn about their cities and their people. If you want to be my friend, message me and I can help you with your Spanish. :D

In addition, I do freelance 3D Architectural Visualization work alongside my studies.

In the future, I'll write about my hobbies and what I do in my free time, like calisthenics, yoga, drawing, salsa dancing, travel, photography and my favourite hobby: the hand-balance( I'll attach a pic).


Please don't hesitate to correct me. I'd appreciate it.
Muchas gracias por leerme.


Well done Marko - you've made a good start! A few comments:
"I" (yo) is always a capital
Check my corrections of your punctuation too.
Hobbies do not usually have a capital letter.

"Carrera" in Spanish is "degree" in UK English.  I think you meant this.  I think in North America, they say "major" e.g. "I'm majoring in architecture"  

All the best, Michael 

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