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Bon festival Bon holydays finished yesterday. Bon festival is a traditional Buddhist event in Japan to honor the spirits of one's ancestors which are believed to return to their families from August 13th through 15th. Typically,during the period, Japanese people take days off. In this year, because Saturday and Sunday followed the Bon festival, virtually the Bon holyday got longer from August 13th through 17th.
2014년 8월 18일 오후 2:15
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The Bon Festival

 

The Bon festivities were over holidays finished yesterday.

The Bon Festival is a Japanese traditional Buddhist event in Japan to honor the spirits of one's ancestors which whom are believed to return to see/visit their families from August 13th through the 15th. Typically,_during the this period, the Japanese people would take the days off.

In this year, because Saturday and Sunday followed the Bon Festival, therefore virtually the Bon holidaywere extended  got longer from August 13th through till August the 17th.

2014년 8월 18일
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Bon festival

The Bon holidays finished ended yesterday.

Bon festival is a traditional Buddhist event in Japan to honor the spirits of one's ancestors, which are believed to return to their families from August 13th through 15th. Typically,during the period, Japanese people take days off. [Better: Japanese people typically take days off from work or school during this period.]

In This year, because Saturday and Sunday followed the Bon festival, virtually the Bon holiday essentially got longer and lasted from August 13th through 17th.

 

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2014년 8월 18일
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