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Brazilian's food Hello everybody! How are you? I am writing to talk about Brazilian's food. Every State in Brazil has its traditional food. In Bahia State we have "Acarajé". In São Paulo we have "Virado a Paulista". In my hometown (at Espírito Santo State) we have Moqueca Capixaba. Moqueca Capixaba is a kind of Fish Soup. People come to my hometown just to eat that. We also have other foods like Feijoada and Feijão Tropeiro. We have drinks too. We have drinks like Cachaça, Caipirinha, Caldo de Cana (sugarcane juice) and others. Those drinks and foods are traditional in whole country. Brazil has good foods and drinks that makes my mouth water. I think you should come here and taste it. You will be welcome!
2014년 8월 20일 오후 4:26
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Brazilian's food

Hello everybody! How are you?

I am writing to talk about Brazilian's food.

Every State in Brazil has its traditional food. In Bahia State we have "Acarajé". In São Paulo we have "Virado a Paulista". In my hometown (at Espírito Santo State) we have Moqueca Capixaba. Moqueca Capixaba is a kind of Fish Soup. People come to my hometown just to eat that.

We also have other foods like Feijoada and Feijão Tropeiro. We have drinks too. We have drinks like Cachaça, Caipirinha, Caldo de Cana (sugarcane juice) and others. Those drinks and foods are traditional in the whole country.

Brazil has good food and drinks that make my mouth water. I think you should come here and taste sample/enjoy it. You will be welcome!

 

<em>Not much to correct :) Excellent!</em>

2014년 8월 20일
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