杨柳
Friendship is nice I like to meet different friends,everyone in the world is special,everyone has his own opinion to the world ,when we meet each other ,we can share what we have experienced,things we like or hate .Communication is fantistic!
2014년 8월 21일 오후 2:18
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Friendship is nice

I would like to meet different friends, everyone in the world is special, everyone has his, or her, own opinion to about the world ,. When we meet each other, we can share what we have experienced, things we like or hate. Communication is fantistic!

 

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2014년 8월 21일
1

Friendship is Nice

I like to meet different friends, everyone in the world is special, everyone has his own opinion to about the world. ,When we meet each other, we can share what we have experienced, things we like or hate .Communication is fantastic!

2014년 8월 21일
Yep right.
2014년 8월 21일
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