A brand new stage After graduating from college, I came to the city of shenyang is always cherished dream, to the enterprise shunda group.This is a brand new stage of my life, I also to work, by the s

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A brand new stage After graduating from college, I came to the city of shenyang is always cherished dream, to the enterprise shunda group.This is a brand new stage of my life, I also to work, by the students have a school to the transformation of the society.As to the identity of the metamorphosis, the surrounding environment will also change.We must learn to adapt to the present all, adapt to the society, a good development.

2014년 8월 23일 오전 10:39

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A brand new stage

After graduating from college, I came to the city of shenyang is always cherished dream, to the enterprise shunda group.This is a brand new stage of my life, I also to work, by the students have a school to the transformation of the society.As to the identity of the metamorphosis, the surrounding environment will also change.We must learn to adapt to the present all, adapt to the society, a good development.

I think you should divide the first part. Don't be scared to use short sentences.

"After graduating from college, I came to the city of Shenyang. This has always been a cherished dream of mine. I now work for the Enterprise Shunda group".

2016년 5월 20일

Go to effort!

2014년 8월 31일

After graduating from college, learning to adapt to the new environment, new people and new things is important! Now I am still a student, my new term just start, but I know I have to adapt to the society ahead of time. so, come on!

2014년 8월 31일

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