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Is my entry correct? I have not written for a long time. Last entry was 17 days ago. I am thinking something to write. My family has preparing to build a new house beautiful and taller than old house. We can living in a new house after 3 months. Now, we need rent a house to movement at . I would be contribution a little thing to help my parent . I will be going to work at Hotel with position security guard next month. Where I will be working have not foreign people to improve my English skills.
2014년 8월 27일 오후 5:29
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Is my entry correct?

I have not written for a long time. My last entry was 17 days ago. I am thinking of something to write. My family has is preparing to build a taller and more beautiful new house beautiful and taller than old house. We can move in  living in a new house after 3 months time but now, we need to rent a house to movement at stay in. I will be making a small would be contribution a little thing to help my parents . I will be going to work at a hotel as a Security Guard with position security guard next month. Unfortunately, there won't be any English speaking foreigners at the hotel where I will be working have not foreign people to in order to improve my English skills.

2014년 8월 27일
Thanks.
2014년 8월 28일
I hope you have helped with the house construction and you will have to look harder to find some English speakers who might come into your area.
2014년 8월 27일
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