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Fashionable Clothes Many people like to wear modern clothes. It increases their personality and allows them to move with the society. It also creates a fuss in the society because it will not be possible for every person to buy the expensive clothes. Even though fashionable clothes have a lot of good things, it can also affect people in a bad way. One of the good things about fashionable clothes is that it can increase the personality of the human being. It can allow him to move in the society because mainly in the society people like modern clothes. Mostly, people are inspired by the celebrities and watch their ads and films on TV. Adults can be inspired by this that what Tom Cruise wears in his movies and teen agers can be inspired by this that what Justin Bieber wears in his concerts. Both adults and teen agers take the benefit from this and feel happy about it.
2014년 8월 27일 오후 7:08
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Replace "It increases their personality" with "It shows their personality".

 

Replace "teen agers" with "teenagers".

 

2014년 8월 27일
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