A New Begining A new school term is start.I'm a junior now,but I still confused for my future.I don't know how to earn my life in this cruel society.My aunt asked me to make a life plan but I even don

Fangqi Wen

A New Begining A new school term is start.I'm a junior now,but I still confused for my future.I don't know how to earn my life in this cruel society.My aunt asked me to make a life plan but I even don't know what I want to do in the future. If I want to change the condition,I have to change myself first.

2014년 8월 28일 오후 1:26

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A New Begining

A new school term is about to start.I'm a junior now,but I'm worried about my future.I don't know how to move on my life in this cruel society.My aunt asked me to make a life plan but I even don't know what I want to do in the future.
If I want to change the conditions,I have to change myself first.

I am not native speaker but I wanted to correct your writing.I am sorry my mistakes in advance.Good Luck!

2014년 8월 28일

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