Myriam
My first day here It's my first day on this web site and i'm happy to be here and i hope i'll meet new people !
2014년 8월 29일 오후 12:31
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My first day here

It's my first day on this web site and i'm happy to be here and i hope i'll meet new people !

 

It's my first day on this website and I'm happy to be here. I hope I can meet new people!

 

Point to work on: don't use more than one "and" in a single sentence.

 

Hey!

 

I'm looking for someone for a French-English exchange. Are you interested?

 

Cheers,

 

Chris

2014년 8월 29일
OK thanks and yeah why not!
2014년 8월 29일
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