olivia
A cold day It rains heavily last night in my city, so when I woke up in the morning, i feel a little cold of autumn. I usually gei up late in autumn because I always feel sleepy. My alarm is set at 6:30 a.m. But I didn't heard it this morning and got up at 7:00! So I washed my face and rinsed my tooth in 15 miniutes! Can you inmagine! I think the reason is cold.
2014년 9월 3일 오전 2:58
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A Cold Day

It rained heavily last night in my city, so when I woke up in the this morning, I felt feel a little cold, the beginnings  of autumn. I usually get up late in autumn because I always feel sleepy. My alarm is set at 6:30 a.m. But I didn't heard it this morning and got up at 7:00! So I washed my face and brushed rinsed my teeth in 15 miniutes! Can you inmagine! I think the reason is was the cold.

2014년 9월 3일

A cold day

It rains rained heavily last night in my city, so when I woke up in the morning,   i  I  feel felt a little cold of autumn. I usually gei get up late in autumn because I always feel sleepy. My alarm is set at 6:30 a.m. But I didn't heard hear it this morning and got up at 7:00! So I washed my face and rinsed my tooth mouth [1] in 15 miniutes! Can you inmagine imagine! I think the reason is the cold.

 

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[1] We would normally say either of the following: "rinsed my mouth" or "brushed by teeth".  (Please note the plural "teeth", because you did not brush only one "tooth".)

2014년 9월 3일
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