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A volleyball match There had a volleyball match yesterday in our unit.I am one of the players. I’m a setter on the court . This is a very important position . I build up an attacks every time when the other players pass the ball to me. Finaly, we won the game through the efforts of the half an hour.
2014년 9월 3일 오전 3:52
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A volleyball match

There had  was a volleyball match yesterday (in our unit.)  by our team , I am one of the players. I’m a setter on the court . This is a very important position . I build up an attack  every time when the other players pass the ball to me. Finaly  Finally , we won the game through the efforts of the whole team during the half an hour game .



Well done , was not completely sure some of your meaning so have changed slightly togive better structure and meaning .

Hope this helps ,  Ian - English teacher / China .

2014년 9월 3일
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