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About words Caress the phrase a lot and it''ll smile to you.
2014년 9월 14일 오후 4:33
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About words

Caress the phrase a lot and it''ll smile to you.

 

I like the corrections that have been made thus far.  I do appreciate that you've personified the word 'phrase' by making it both caressable and able to smile.  I think that's a nice literary touch!  If you want it to smile, it should smile "for you" or smile "at you."

2014년 9월 15일
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Caressez longuement votre phrase et elle finira par sourire.
'Caress your phrase tenderly: it will end by smiling at you'

2014년 9월 15일

"Caress your phrase for a long while and it will end by smilling at you"

2014년 9월 17일
The original, of course, is in French. I would have translated it as, "Caress your sentence for a long while, and it will end up smiling."
2014년 9월 15일

About words

"Caress the phrase a lot and it''ll smile to you." A.France

2014년 9월 14일
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