cynthia
STARS My grandma said,"every star represents a person,each person would become a star." when i was a child,i always tried to count stars,despites my grandma forbade me to do that.However, i would give up at last. For there were so many stars in the sky that i couldn't remember which star i had counted. There has been raining a few days.The raining makes me depressed.Maybe there are the tears, the stars' tears,which brings people's miss.
2014년 9월 15일 오전 9:46
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STARS

My grandma said says,"every star represents a person,each person would will become a star."
when i I was a child,i I always tried to count stars,despites my grandma forbade forbidding me to from doing that.However, i I would give up at last. For there were so many stars in the sky that i I couldn't remember which stars i I had counted.
There has been raining for the last a few days.The raining makes me depressed.Maybe there are the tears, the stars' tears,which brings people's peoples' miss mess.

2014년 9월 15일
Twinkle twinkle little star
2014년 9월 15일
nice
2014년 9월 15일
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