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Back to English Time passes so fast. One year has passed. I left the English lesson since I was so hectic with my tasks. Many words left my brain. I find myself confused when trying to make a sentence. Now I try to learn it back. I have to work hard to achieve my goal. So I've plan to memorize 20 - 30 words everyday from now on. Hope my brain can accept this and it can work well. May God help me and allow me to master English.....
2014년 9월 16일 오전 7:17
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(I will break this down sentence by sentence)

 

Back to English

 

Time passes so fast.

Good.

 

One year has passed.

Good.

 

I left the English lesson since I was so hectic with my tasks.

I stopped taking English lessonssince/because I was so busy with other tasks/priorities/things.

 

Many words left my brain.

Fine

 

I find myself confused when trying to make a sentence.

(Grammatically fine, but I would say: "I find it difficult to make sentences")


Now I try to learn it back.

Now I am trying to revise what I have already learnt.

 

I have to work hard to achieve my goal.

Good

 

So I've plan to memorize 20 - 30 words everyday from now on.

So I plan to memorize 20 - 30 words everyday from now on.

 

Hope my brain can accept this and it can work well.

I hope my brain accepts this new information.

 

May God help me and allow me to master English.....

Good!


Well done :)

2014년 9월 16일
Hi Luca..Thanks for your comment..Yes, you and me are English students...So we need big patience to get our dream and don't worry if our English is bad now :D Hope you can master it fast :)
2014년 9월 16일
I know that With costance and patience you will make a lot of progress. ps I can try to learn english, so sorry for my bad language.
2014년 9월 16일
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