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I Fall In Love Somebody I have so many questions in my heart. My heart sing a song which is name "Don't Leave Me" I am a slave of my heart. It think, it fell, it decide... When I close my eyes, you are my sun.
2014년 9월 17일 오후 9:13
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I Have Fallen In Love With Somebody

I have so many questions in my heart. My heart is singing a song which is name called, "Don't Leave Me." I am the slave of my heart. It thinks, it feels and it decides... When I close my eyes, you are my sun.

 

<em>But, soft! what light through yonder window breaks?</em>

<em>It is the east, and Juliet is the sun!</em>

- Romeo and Juliet

 

Peter's corrections are fine; I've given some basic grammar to "shape" your sentences. I hope I've guessed your meaning properly.

2014년 9월 17일
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I Fell In Love with Somebody.

I have so many questions in my heart. My heart sings a song called "Don't Leave Me". I am a slave of my heart. It thinks, it falls, it decides... When I close my eyes, you are my sun.

2014년 9월 17일
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