Coronita
polite reminder I am sending you this note as a reminder of the email I sent last week expressing my wish to seek professional employment with your group, here in the UK.   I attached my CV and portfolio for your consideration. I appreciate you taking out time to consider my CV and look forward to an interview with you.
2014년 9월 18일 오후 4:14
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Hi Coronita,

 

Your message is fine, there is no need to correct it, however, I would recommend adding some more details about yourself to help them find your email and CV. With that in mind, it might be better to change the second sentence to, "My email was dated [dd] of [month], and my full name is [firstname lastname]." 


Polite Reminder

I am sending you this note as a reminder of the email I sent last week expressing my wish to seek professional employment with your group, here in the UK.  

I attached my CV and portfolio for your consideration.

I appreciate you taking out time to consider my CV and look forward to an interview with you.

2014년 9월 18일
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<em>[Mr./Ms.:]</em>
I am <em>following-up on </em><em>my message</em> <em>of</em> last week <em>in regard to</em> <em>my potential </em>employment. <em>Attached for your consideration, please find my curriculum vitae and professional portfolio</em>.

<em>I know that I will prove to be an excellent addition to your team in the United Kingdom, and</em> look forward to <em>discussing this further during an employment </em>interview <em>at your earliest convienence. </em>

<em>Sincerely,

Coronita
[telephone number]
[mailing address]
[email address] </em>

<em>     Coronita, Bueno. Las abreviaturas no son apropiados en la escritura formal de negocios de este tipo. Tenga cuidado de no "decirles qué hacer," sólo sugerir acciones cortésmente. ¡Buena suerte!</em>

2014년 9월 19일
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