Faye
初めまして! 皆さんこんにちわ!私フエイちゃんです. にほんごにべんきょうする. よろしくおねがいします!!
2014년 9월 19일 오전 9:19
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初めまして!

皆さんこんにち!私フエイちゃんです. にほんごべんきょうする. よろしくおねがいします!!

*If ちゃn is a part of your name, it's better to write it in katakana. If it's for calling a person like さん、くん, you don't need to put it after your name, it's for that you call other person. 

*べんきょうする is the informal form and you started with the formal form. Since it's better not mix them up in one note, writing べんきょうします is better, besides べんきょうしています sounds more natural in this case. 

 

Good job! Please enjoy learning. I hope this was helpful. 

2014년 9월 20일
こんにちは、フエイさん。 僕はDimaです。 よろしくお願いします! このサイト初めてです。日本語の会話を治したいんですよ。 どのくらいの時間日本語を習っていますか
2014년 9월 19일
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