Alisa
My daily life Today is Saturday.But I have to work. A proverb says that time is money. I consider this wrong. Why? Because we all know that we can earn money be work but can not in any way get back time . For this reason, we can say that time is more valuable than money. I want to have a look now go out.I want to go to many different countries.I think tourism in the way I get a lot of .So it is very important for me to say good spoken English.
2014년 9월 20일 오전 2:03
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My daily life

Today is Saturday.But I have to work. A proverb says that time is money but I consider this wrong. Why? Because we all know that we can earn/make  money by work but we all know that time is something that you can't get back. For this reason, we can say that time is more valuable/more important than money.
I want immediately to go outside.I want to visit/explore many different countries.I personally believe that tourism has a lot of benefits for me .So it is very important to have a good knowledge of English.

2014년 9월 20일
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