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Hi, world!!! Hi, world! I want to improve my English and find new friends. So, if you want to help me or find new friend from Ukraine - write to me. Also I can help you with Russian or Ukrainian.
2014년 9월 29일 오전 10:42
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Hi, world!!!

Hi, world! I want to improve my English and find new friends. So, if you want to help me or find new friend from Ukraine - write to me. In return, I can help you with Russian or Ukrainian.

2014년 9월 30일
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