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I Hardly Slept Last Night I went to bed early last night, but I couldn't sleep until mid-night, which was terrible. My roommates always stay up late every day, and they always make noise and bother others (ignored whether they did that on purpose or not). I pretty fed up with their awful behaviours, when they played computer games, they yelled if they won, when they watched movie, they laugh out aloud if that movie was amusing, plus they switched on the sounder. It was very troublesome. I was bothered all night and hardly slept.
2010년 12월 25일 오전 1:31
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I Hardly Slept Last Night

I went to bed early last night, but I couldn't sleep until mid-night, which was terrible. My roommates always stay up late <strike>every day</strike>, and they always make noise and bother others (they don't care if <strike>whether t</strike>hey do that on purpose or not). I'm pretty fed up with how they act.  They play<strike>ed </strike>computer games and yell<strike>ed </strike>when they win... when they watch<strike>ed </strike>movie, they laugh out aloud if that movie was funny, plus they turned up the sound. It was very annoying. I was bothered all night and I hardly slept.
 

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