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A text about me and my girlfriend One day, I was surfing on the internet, when suddenly I've received an e-mail that said "Register now on Badoo, the most famous social network for single people!". Well, I didn't have nothing to lose, so, why don't to register on it? As I really like asian girls, the first thing that I've done was, obviously, to look for some asian girl, and I've found, her name was Pollyanna(No, she doesn't like vodka, xD).Oh god, she was very, very beautiful! I've thought: To send a message to her, or not to send a message to her, that's the question(lol).As I was a very shy guy, I've decided to not send a message to her. But, as that website had a visualization system like Facebook, she has seen that I had visited her. to be continued... If there's some mistake on my text, please guys, correct me. Thank you for your attention!
2014년 10월 1일 오전 5:13
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A text about me and my girlfriend

One day, I was surfing on the internet, when suddenly I received an e-mail that said "Register now on Badoo, the most famous social network for single people!". Well, I didn't have anything to lose, so, why not register on it? As I really like Asian girls, the first thing that I did was, obviously, to look for some Asian girl, and I found a girl whose name was Pollyanna(No, she doesn't like vodka, xD).Oh god, she was very, very beautiful! I thought:should I send a message to her, or not send a message to her, that's the question(lol).As I was a very shy guy, I decided not to send a message to her. But, as that website had a visualization system like Facebook, she saw that I had visited her page.
to be continued...
If there's some mistake on my text, please guys, correct me.
Thank you for your attention!

 

Good luck in love!

2014년 10월 1일
1

A text about me and my girlfriend

One day, I was surfing on the internet, when suddenly I've I received an e-mail that said "Register now on Badoo, the most famous social network for single people!". Well, I didn't have nothing to lose, so, why don't to not register on it? As I really like Asian girls, the first thing that I've done I did was, obviously, to look for some an Asian girl, and I've found one - her name was Pollyanna(No, she doesn't like vodka, xD).Oh god, she was very, very beautiful! I've thought: To send a message to her, or not to send a message to her, that's was the question(lol). As I was a very shy guy, I've decided to not send a message to her. But, as that website had a visualization system like Facebook, she has had seen that I had visited her.
to be continued...
If there's some mistake on my text, please guys, correct me.
Thank you for your attention!

2014년 10월 1일
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